Saturday, January 07, 2006

I wish I were...

I wish I were a shining star
Emerging through the dark of space
I wish I were a burning light
Just shooting forms in lines of rays
I wish I were in lands so far
Where time would stop its timeless race
And yet I wish to live a life
Of harmony where music plays

I wish I were a heartless fool
Where deep emotions have no place
For if I were as she is now
I'd feel remorse from what she says
Of sorrows that arouse her pain
Or from tomorrow's evil case
Nothing will remain the same
Nothing goes and nothing stays


I don't even know what I'm trying to say here... it's as random as can be... came out of the blue... so i guess I'll figure out later :os :os ...


x~nezitiC said...

It's nice.

TripleTee said...

thanx :)

x~nezitiC said...

I came back to read the poem again :_).

TripleTee said...

lol... good to know :p

x~nezitiC said...

I am back again, but this time to check something else.

Samyah said...

Very nice Tee.. I'm not really a fan of poetry so it takes something pretty good for me to like and I quite liked this idea! Eps the "I wish I was.." parts.

iamnasra said...

Very nice ..I loved it..Why it had changed did u change the tune on the 2nd part

TripleTee said...

Sam: aww... thanx for the compliment :)

Nasra:... good question :os... I probably just felt it would be too boring to keep repeating the words... and with me usually the endings always have to be different for some reason...
gives a stronger effect... lol... thanxx :)

NaBHaN said...

wonderful as always tee.. your next book should contain all your poems. :D

TripleTee said...

yo nabs'll actually find some of my poems in a book that'll be published soon :)... though not by

I'm glad you liked it dear...thaanx :)