Here's a piece o' my mind for being advised to write poems again. I don't know if one could make any sense out of it but is my first since I've last written any... well... enjoy... Time goes on and never waits for any tribe or race
Some have gone and said that they had times to be retraced
Some regreted doing things they hoped to be erased
Yet as hard as they have tried, their deeds were hard to face
So I sat just reminiscing words I heard before
Wise ones said one's true existance counts for what they bore
Wise ones said that nothing else is counted anymore
So it was that values made were less or else were more
Now I saw that backgrounds have completely disappeared
Now I saw that some high ways were not what they appeared
Goin on the hardest way was not the thing I feared
Just as long as getting there would mean my triumph neared
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6 comments:
I was working today on a new design called 'deep thoughts' and I titled it b4 seeing this post in your blog. :p
too bad it's on my friends comp , would have posted it otherwise.
lool.. damn!.. no fair! I wanna see it... what would be even more interesting is if it was actually related to this post :p
but that would be too much of a coincidence now, eh!
I was actually going to name mine "A time to remember" but since I had no clue what it would turn out to be seeing as I was writing it that instant I just came up with "Deep Thoughts"... hehe, slammin!
wonderful piece.. I guess I didn't comprehend the full meaning yet.. but I loved most of the lines you wrote. They're so true.
haha! well observed Niggy! :D... thanx a lot! I knew I meant somethin :p... truly just my thoughts. I'm happy u liked it :)
Very فيلسوفة
Ok so I can not sell the work philosophy
But your worrds have so much wisdom in it ..You got to sid into it to know what it means
lol Nasra... it's great to hear that from u... this was a subject I chose to express the moment I began writing. I'm glad you all got the message I was tryin to convey . thanx :D
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